The Daring Twins: A Story for Young Folk — A Reader’s Guide
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Men were carrying trunks in at the side entrance. Before the door stood a carriage from which a woman, a man, a girl and a boy had alighted. They were gazing around them with some curiosity, for the scene was all new to them.
“Isn’t it funny,” whispered Becky, softly, “to think of other folks living in our old home?”
“It isn’t ours, now,” said Don, testily; “so, what’s the odds?”
“It was sold last fall, soon after papa died,” remarked Phœbe, “and this Mr. Randolph bought it. I suppose that’s him strutting across the lawn--the stout gentleman with the cane.”
“The grounds seem more of an attraction to them than the house,” remarked Phil.
“Yes, they’re fresh from the city,” answered his twin. “I’m rather surprised they haven’t come to Riverdale before, to occupy their new home.”
“Our house was sold ’cause we were poor, wasn’t it?” asked Sue.
“Yes, dear. We couldn’t afford to keep it, because poor papa left a lot of debts that had to be paid. So we moved over here, to Gran’pa Eliot’s.”
“Don’t like this place,” observed Don, his hands thrust deep in his pockets, as he stared across the street. “It isn’t half as fine or cosy as our old home.”
“It’s lucky for us that Gran’pa Eliot had a house,” returned Phil, gravely. “And it’s lucky Mr. Ferguson induced him to let us live in it.”
“Guess gran’pa couldn’t help himself, being paralyzed like he is,” said Becky.
“It’s the first thing he ever did for us, anyhow,” added Don, grumblingly. “And he sticks to his room upstairs and won’t let us come near him.”
“Do you want to visit gran’pa?” asked Phœbe, turning to her younger brother.
“Then don’t complain, dear, if he doesn’t want you. He’s old and helpless; and as for helping us, I’m afraid gran’pa is almost as poor as we are,” she said, her eyes still regarding, with wistful earnestness, the scene across the street.
“Poor! Gran’pa Eliot poor, with this big house?” exclaimed Sue, incredulously.
“I think so; I’m sure it’s so,” answered Phœbe. “Old Miss Halliday asked me to keep you all from picking the fruit in the garden, when it ripens; because, she says gran’pa has to sell it to get enough money to pay taxes and his living expenses. And she gathers all the eggs from the chickens and sells them to Mr. Wyatt, the grocer. That must mean gran’pa’s pretty poor, you know.”
“Is old Miss Halliday any relation to us?” asked Don.
“No; she was an old servant of grandmother’s, before she died--her housekeeper, I believe; and afterward, when gran’pa became paralyzed, she took care of him.”
“She seems to run everything around this place as if she owned it,” muttered the boy.
“She’s a very faithful woman,” observed Phil; “and a very disagreeable one. I don’t know what gran’pa would have done without her. She gets his meals and waits on him night and day.”
“Somehow,” said Becky, “I sort o’ hate her. She won’t let us into any of the back rooms upstairs, though she and gran’pa can’t use all of ’em; and she never comes near us unless she wants to jaw about something we’ve done. I run a clothesline through the grass yesterday, and tripped old Halliday up when she went to feed the chickens, and she was as mad as anything.”
“I think she doesn’t care much for young people,” admitted Phœbe; “and as none of us cares for her it’s just as well that we should live apart--even if we occupy the same house. After all, my dears, we should be grateful for being allowed so much room in this comfortable old shack. We had no other place to go after our own home was sold.”
There was silence in the little group for a moment. Then Becky asked, curiously:
“Where do we get the money to live on? We have to pay our own grocery bills, don’t we?”
Phil started and looked upon his younger sister wonderingly, as if she had suggested a new thought to him. Then he turned to Phœbe.
“There must have been a little money left,” he said. “It never occurred to me before. I must ask Mr. Ferguson about it.”
Phœbe flushed a trifle, but looked down instead of meeting her twin’s earnest gaze.
L. Frank Baum, best known for his Oz fantasies, opens The Daring Twins with a scene of domestic bustle: Aunt Hyacinth scolds the children in dialect, and the five young Darings scramble for cakes before school. The voice is brisk, colloquial, and lightly humorous—a tone that soon gives way to something far more somber. By the later chapters, the narrative has narrowed to Phœbe’s solitary, trembling vigil as she spies on the housekeeper Elaine counting gold by candlelight. The shift from communal chatter to isolated dread is the book’s most striking structural move.
From Dialect to Dread: A Change in Narrative Pace
The opening chapters move at a leisurely, almost episodic pace. Dialogue dominates: the children tease one another, and Aunt Hyacinth’s dialect (“Now you-all stop dat a-foolin’”) establishes a warm, regional texture. Baum lingers on breakfast routines and school preparations, letting the reader settle into the Darings’ crowded household. But as the story progresses, the tempo tightens. By the time Phœbe climbs down from her hiding place, the prose becomes taut and sensory: “limbs were getting numb,” “knees knocked together tremblingly,” “she stuck obstinately to her post.” The earlier chatter vanishes, replaced by internal monologue and physical detail. This acceleration from social comedy to psychological suspense is deliberate and effective.
Phœbe’s Voice: The Weight of a Secret
Phœbe’s narration carries the emotional core of the later excerpts. Her discovery of the hidden gold is rendered not as triumph but as a burden: “There was no sleep for the girl that night.” Baum gives her a precise, almost legalistic reasoning as she pieces together the miser’s scheme—the trapdoor, the cupboard, the false report of poverty. Yet her reaction is visceral: “scorn and resentment,” “shame,” “an abominable, inhuman passion.” She decides to keep the secret even from her brother Phil, a choice that isolates her within the family. The language here is stripped of ornament, relying on short declarative sentences and repeated phrases (“and yet—and yet—”) to convey her turmoil. This interior focus marks a clear departure from the earlier, more external storytelling.
Recurring Details: Gold, Candles, and Hidden Spaces
Baum builds suspense through a handful of recurring physical details. The sound of gold being “slid across the table” is mentioned multiple times, first as a puzzling noise, later as a confirmed horror. Candles appear in both the opening and the discovery scene—Aunt Hyacinth’s breakfast cakes are replaced by Elaine’s “leer of cunning” by candlelight. The hidden spaces—the trap in the floor, the cupboard behind the mantel—become architectural metaphors for the family’s concealed troubles. Even the landscape shifts: the crowded kitchen gives way to a silent valley where Phœbe walks “hoping the morning air would cool her throbbing brain.” These repeated motifs anchor the reader in a world where nothing is quite as open as it first seems.
Readers coming from Baum’s Oz books will find a different register here: less whimsy, more moral weight. The excerpts suggest a novel that rewards attention to its pacing—how quickly the tone can darken, and how much weight a single character’s perspective can carry. Pay particular attention to the moments when the narrative slows down: those are where the real story hides.
That Daring family’s quiet desperation stuck with me long after I closed the book, especially Phœbe’s lonely secret-keeping. It reminded me of another story I stumbled upon, one where the child narrator carries a similar weight of worry and wonder. There is something tender about how both books treat a young person’s courage, not as grand heroics but as small, brave moments. Wings and Stings: A Tale for the Young — Text and Context lingered with me the same way.
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