Gloria: A Girl and Her Dad — A Closer Reading

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Garis, Lilian, 1873-1954 Project Gutenberg 2019 Not confirmed
Fathers -- Juvenile fiction; Friendship -- Juvenile fiction; Family -- Juvenile fiction; Aunts -- Juvenile fiction Readers of public-domain and historical texts
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Words 48,292
Reading time 210 min
Text sections 23

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Gloria Doane, a motherless girl, and Tom Whitely, a fatherless boy, form a close friendship in this 1923 children's novel. The excerpts reveal contrasts in their appearances and personalities, Gloria's secretive curiosity about family finances, and her evolving relationship with her aunt.
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Gloria which compelled a close scrutiny, under the brim of her hat seemed the very point of vantage, while Tom—one would hate to scrutinize Tom. Even the friendliest notice would seem rude if too closely given. He was not bashful, really, nor was he in any way stupid, on the contrary, his alert mind that only flashed out in moments of unchecked enthusiasm was the magnet that held Gloria Doane to his companionship, ever since they had both toddled off to their first battle with learning, in the back room of Miss Mary Drake’s Fancy Store. But few others understood Tom, they were generally too busy condemning Gloria’s lack of discrimination in her selection of such a companion.

Besides those shadowy blue eyes Tom also had freckles—a real saddle of them across his nose; splendid, healthy, ginger brown freckles. They were rather unfair to the nose, however, destroying what might have been an aristocratic outline; but freckles are like that—ruthless when once they get a footing. Being tall, having freckles and possessing a musically liquid voice, gave Tom his chief claim to personality, but his own mother called him Tommy-lad and declared he was a fine, upstanding little youngster.

Just as Gloria Doane had a father and no mother, so Tom Whitely had a mother and no father. This similarity of parental privation may have forged the bond of companionship stronger; at any rate, Gloria and Tom were chums.

All the joys of country life ever piped in poet’s tunes would be flat and monotonous if unshared by a chum. You may talk of the music of the birds and the magic of the running brook, even of the glory of wild daisy fields and the beauty of sovereign sunsets, but to youth, to the eager young and even to childhood, these would be all rather stupid in solitude. There is no solitude in the city—that can be said in its favor. Even a sick boy or girl may be shut up in narrow quarters there, but somehow the hum of companionship will reach in and sometimes cheer. But in the country it is very different.

Without a chum would be like being without a roof, or even without a family dog. That life around a fishing village is not apt, however, to be so solitary as is found inland, and it was in the seaside town of Barbend that our interesting little friends lived.

Vacation had been particularly merry; picnics, lawn parties, launch trips and even city scouting parties filled the days with continual change and thrilling variety. Tom had earned more than ever before in any vacation, and Gloria felt like a pinwheel revolving in golden sprayed breezes of good times and surprise adventures. Only a few weeks remained now, then the new adventure of fresh school days, with brand new programmes and mysterious possibilities in new teachers (two were due at Barbend this year), these delights, in spite of dreaded routine and perhaps hated studies, beckoned every girl and boy in the township; to say nothing of the hurried last stitches being put in new blouses for the boys and into new dresses for the girls, by anxious mothers.

The launch Finnan-Laddie was lapping the dock just after Gloria had stepped ashore, and Tom happened to be passing from the swamp with a great basket of pond lilies for his next day’s sales. Automatically they fell into step, if that could be said of their peculiar motion, Gloria sort of easing into Tom’s shuffle with a queer little grace note trick that kept the tempo going.

No greetings were exchanged. Would one say hello to the sun, or to the moon or even to some familiar star?

“How did you make out?” asked Gloria, eagerly.

“All right,” replied Tom.

“It’s a wonder you weren’t killed.”

Tom grinned. “That wasn’t anything.”

“It wasn’t!” Gloria’s voice boomed. “Well, if it wasn’t, then I don’t ever want to see another bicycle spill.”

“Not even at the races?”

“No. I hate spills anyhow. They make you gulp and you can’t see anything but dust.”

“You saw my basket go, didn’t you?”

“I should say I did. I thought it would never stop bumping over the stones until it went straight into the brook. But, Tom, honest, you ought to be more careful.”

“Oh, listen who’s talking!”

“Just the same, I never ride over that hill with a clothes basket full of pond lilies and an arm full of papers.”

“But you do ride over there with trees full of blossoms—”

“Oh, well. That was only when we had to get the school decorated—”

The opening chapter of Gloria: A Girl and Her Dad immediately establishes a pair of contrasting portraits. Gloria Doane has “black eyes flashing” and a “floppy white hat” that compels scrutiny, while her companion Tom Whitely possesses “meek, blue and shadowy” eyes and “a real saddle of freckles across his nose.” The narrator insists that Tom’s “alert mind” only flashes out in “unchecked enthusiasm,” a detail that hints at a hidden depth. Both children share a “parental privation”—Gloria has a father and no mother, Tom a mother and no father—which the text suggests may have “forged the bond of companionship stronger.”

Contrasts in Appearance and Character

The first chapter dwells on visible differences between the two friends. Gloria’s “red cheeks” and “black eyes” are set against Tom’s “brave freckles” and “shadowy” blue eyes. The narrator notes that “few others understood Tom” and that people were “too busy condemning Gloria’s lack of discrimination” in choosing him as a companion. Tom’s “musically liquid voice” is listed alongside his freckles and height as his “chief claim to personality,” while his own mother calls him “Tommy-lad” and declares him “a fine, upstanding little youngster.” These details build a character who is underestimated by outsiders but valued by those who know him.

Secrecy and Self-Examination

Later excerpts show Gloria alone, engaged in private rituals. After a risky laugh, she surveys her face in the mirror and thinks, “That was a risky laugh … but it was worth the price.” She quickly removes stage makeup and applies cold cream, reasoning that “any girl may daub on cold cream.” This scene reveals a calculating side: she prepares an excuse for her aunt’s questions about where she was. Her thoughts then turn to family mysteries: “I just wonder what it is uncle wants aunt to tell me” about “Aunt Lottie’s money.” The narrative follows her internal musings as she moves back to the guest room, feeling “a sort of natural proprietorship” over its “nondescript effect of a household orphan.”

Shifts in Domestic Dynamics

Gloria’s relationship with her aunt changes noticeably in the excerpts. When she decides to move back to the guest room, her aunt calls her “Glory dear,” and the narrator remarks that “the magic of accord was started.” They share a merry breakfast, with the aunt urging her to eat jelly because “jelly is fattening,” and Gloria replying, “don’t tempt me to grow out of my clothes.” The aunt’s relief at Gloria’s choice is palpable. Gloria also reflects on her own mother, wondering, “I wonder was my own mother like her?” and later, “I wonder if my mother would have been like that—to me?” These questions link the aunt’s behavior to a larger search for maternal connection.

The excerpts present a girl who navigates between public loyalty to her friend and private curiosity about adult secrets. Readers may attend to how the narrative balances Gloria’s bold exterior with her quieter moments of reflection, and how the minor characters—Tom, the aunt, Hazel—serve as mirrors for her own desires and uncertainties. The novel’s title promises a focus on the father-daughter bond, but the available text suggests that relationship is often mediated through other figures and through Gloria’s own internal negotiations.

Years ago, shelving Gloria: A Girl and Her Dad — A Closer Reading, I lingered on that quiet ache between a motherless girl and a fatherless boy. There’s a similar hush in Chinook, the Cinnamon Cub — Text and Context, where aloneness finds its own patient footing. Two old friends, both knowing the weight of an empty space.

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