Eunice and Cricket — Inside the Classic
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CHAPTER I. TWO AMATEUR PHOTOGRAPHERS.
Two eager heads bent over a small, square, black object that stood on the stone post at the foot of the doorsteps.
“‘Hold the camera steady and push the lever,’” read the brown-eyed girl with the long, dark braid, from the little pamphlet she held in her hand. “Look down in the little round hole, Cricket; you can see the picture perfectly. Isn’t it the _cutest_ thing?”
Cricket squinted down critically.
“It’s going to be perfectly _jolly_,” she cried enthusiastically. “Now stand still as mice, children, while I count three.”
“Stand still as a mice, Helen,” immediately admonished the small girl in the dark red coat, giving a great pinch to the little golden-haired, brown-clad lassie who stood beside her, by way of emphasising her older sister’s words. “Stand still as a mice, Johnnie-goat,” giving the third member of the group a tickle on the back that made him drop his curved horns for more.
“Keep still ‘as a mice,’ yourself,” said Cricket, tapping Miss Red-coat briskly on the head. “All ready, Eunice. ‘You push the button, and we’ll do the rest,’” she quoted, clapping her hands in her favourite fashion. “Hooray! there she goes! Oh, I hope it will be good! That’s all, Zaidie and Helen. You stood _beautifully_. Run along now. Can’t you go around to the stable and take Johnnie-goat back, ’Liza?”
Eunice swept the trio a low bow.
“Thank you, Mr. Johnnie-goat, for standing still so long,” she said, addressing the horned member of the party. “I hope your picture will be _very_ good,” she added, picking up the camera with a highly professional air.
“Take me again,” demanded Zaidie instantly, when Cricket told her once more that they were through with this wonderful process, and that they might go. “I like having my picture tooken. Don’t you, Helen? Let’s sit on Johnnie-goat, and be tooken again,” and Zaidie tried to climb upon the goat’s white back. This, however, was a familiarity which Johnnie could not think of permitting, even from his best friends. He instantly sidled off, not wishing to hurt her feelings by a direct butt. Zaidie unexpectedly sat down on the ground.
“No, we don’t want any more pictures of you now, thank you,” said Eunice, examining her Kodak, while Zaidie demanded a view of the one already taken.
“She thinks it’s like putting a penny in the slot and a picture drops out. This isn’t that kind, my dear. There’s a lot of hard, hard work before you see that picture,” said Cricket importantly.
The day before had been Eunice’s birthday, and this Kodak, which had been a long-desired possession, was a birthday present. As it was given to them entirely ready for use, they had literally nothing to do but “press the button.”
Papa had been too busy that morning to explain the mysterious little affair very particularly, but he told the children to study the pamphlet carefully, and follow directions closely. Eunice and Cricket promptly sat down and read the pamphlet from title-page to _finis_.
Both looked a little blank when they had finished. _Could_ they ever remember all those instructions?
“It’s all _plain_ enough,” said Eunice meditatively, “but the question is, how are we going to remember it all at important times? Now, for instance, about the stops. Listen: ‘Snapshots can only be made when the largest stop is in the lens.’ Will you remember that, Cricket?”
“We might just sit down and learn the whole thing off by heart,” suggested Cricket, wrinkling her forehead thoughtfully.
“Horrors, no!” returned Eunice. “Learn all that? Let’s just carry the pamphlet around with us all the time. If we take the camera anywhere, we can certainly take the book, too. Now let’s go and take a picture.”
“It’s easier to take them out doors, everybody says,” answered Cricket, jumping up. “There’s ’Liza starting out to walk with the twins. Let’s go and take them sitting on the front doorsteps.”
The twins, of course, were perfectly delighted at the idea of having their pictures taken. Zaidie straightway sat herself down on the lowest step, with her hands firmly folded in her lap, and her feet out straight before her, trying vainly to keep the smile out of her dimpled face.
“I don’t want you that way,” said Eunice, laughing, as she turned around. “You must get in some romantic attitude. No, I don’t mean romantic, but picturesque.”
“Couldn’t I be sliding down the railing?” suggested Zaidie eagerly, thinking she saw a chance to indulge in her favourite amusement. “Wouldn’t that be pick-chesk?”
From the opening chapter, Timlow establishes a lively, colloquial voice through the girls' dialogue. Cricket's exclamation "It's going to be perfectly jolly" and Eunice's reading of camera instructions aloud set a tone of eager, hands-on learning. The children's mispronunciation—"Stand still as a mice"—is not corrected but repeated, signaling that the narrative aligns with their perspective rather than an adult's. This choice in diction makes the world feel child-centered, where rules are playfully adapted.
Dialogue as Characterization
Timlow uses dialogue to distinguish the sisters without heavy exposition. Cricket is impulsive and enthusiastic, often clapping her hands and quoting slogans like "You push the button, and we'll do the rest." Eunice, the older sister, reads instructions and directs the scene with a calm authority. Even minor characters like Zaidie and Helen are sketched through their few lines: Zaidie's pinch and tickle of Johnnie-goat show a bossy streak. The author avoids tagging every line with adverbs; instead, the rhythm of speech—Cricket's exclamations, Eunice's measured commands—carries the characterization.
Description Through Domestic Detail
In the later excerpt, Timlow builds a scene of poverty through the girls' observations rather than authorial commentary. Cricket's inventory of Mrs. Brummagen's kitchen—"a teakettle and a saucepan," a frying pan, a tin pan—contrasts sharply with the "shining utensils" at home. The girls' surprise at the lack of a bread knife or tablecloth reveals their sheltered upbringing. Timlow lets the details speak: the "faded pink thing" on the table, the dull knife, the scorched bread. The description is filtered through the children's practical concerns—hunger and improvisation—making the setting feel immediate and unvarnished.
Structure of Problem-Solving
The cooking scene follows a clear problem-solution structure that mirrors the earlier photography episode. In both, the girls face a practical challenge (taking a photo, preparing a meal) and work through it step by step. Dialogue carries the action: "Can't you go around to the stable and take Johnnie-goat back?" and "I can't find any regular bread-knife." Timlow uses this pattern to show resourcefulness and collaboration. The failures—scorched bread, dull knives—are treated as humorous obstacles, not crises. This structural choice keeps the tone light while demonstrating the characters' growing competence.
Recurring Motifs: Cameras and Cooking
Two motifs recur in the excerpts: the Kodak camera and the improvised meal. Both involve technology or domestic skills that the girls are learning to master. The camera is described with precise terms—"lever," "little round hole"—while the cooking requires adapting to limited tools. These motifs tie to the catalog subjects of "Conduct of life" and "Youth — Conduct of life": the girls are learning through doing. Timlow does not moralize; instead, she embeds lessons in the narrative's fabric. The goat, Johnnie-goat, appears in both scenes as a comic participant, linking the episodes and reinforcing the domestic, slightly chaotic atmosphere.
Readers attentive to Timlow's craft will notice how she builds character and setting through what the girls say and see, rather than through authorial summary. The excerpts suggest a narrative that trusts its young protagonists to drive the story. For those interested in late-nineteenth-century children's literature, the book offers a case study in how dialogue and descriptive detail can convey social class, family dynamics, and moral growth without overt instruction.
Reading about Eunice and Cricket’s careful diction, how their voices shaped every scene, I found myself quietly recalling another story’s heart. It was that same warmth between a girl and her father, the gentle way he let her stumble through her own ideas. That feeling lingers like old light, and I thought of Gloria: A Girl and Her Dad — A Closer Reading, a book that seemed to carry a similar hush.
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